Saturday, November 7, 2020

Chapter 2


Sandy Point




Fiona lit a candle and set it down next to the guitar by Jimmy's grave.  Jimmy had counted them as friends, and they'd tried to hold onto him, tried hard, but failed.  Their parents had made a particular effort to save him.  They failed too.  Just before they disappeared, just before that terrible failure, they tried to prevent this one.

The golden light of the last of the day shone in that candle, and, careful to keep her back to the water and the Gate Rock, Vivian tried not to cry. It was another painful, inexplicable death.

Neither of them could hear him, although if they called Vivian knew he would respond.  Any of the dead here would.  Here and everywhere else, the dead would respond to either sister. 


She turned away, walked over to a bench that faced the garden and not the water and sat down.  Fiona joined her.  Scrolling through many photos Vivian stopped. “Look at this one.”


There weren't many stages on the Point.  This one was out on the western shore near the lighthouse.  It was the best, and Jimmy was the best.  His death should mean something to them, should inspire them or motivate them or something.  It just made them sad.


"What do we do, Viv? Do we keep sitting here in Sandy Point doing nothing? If they're dead, why can't we reach them?"


A year ago their mother vanished, no, not vanished, was murdered and kidnapped or some combination of violent removal from their home at Cloud Lake far up in the Northern Range. It had been exactly six months, two weeks and one day since their father had left in great excitement claiming he was bringing her home and would be back in a day. He never returned.

Their father, like the two of them could see and talk to the dead. Their mother could not. Their mother talked to the stars where she worked up in the Observatory in the desert islands, before she started dying, before someone ended that long death early. At the end, they seemed to have discovered a way to combine the two, a dangerous way, a way they kept to themselves and a way both sisters had become convinced was the reason both Luca and Kinley were gone.

Tired of thinking and digging and crying about it, Vivian told her sister, "You're right, if they're dead we should be able to reach them. We don't know what happened and we can't fix it and we're stuck here, so all of that is one big whatever."


Fiona was quiet. It wasn't calm or dejected. It was ominous. "Don't start it again," she warned her sister. "I know what he told us. We don't understand it, we can't figure it out, it's like telling us to pull down the sky and pick the right cloud and make it rain for us."

Luca Dirac had said, in all seriousness, to find a Lombardo if he didn't return. Find one. Then do what? Make it wave its Lombardo hand and do magic? There weren't any who would even listen to them about it. They'd tried. Everybody looked at them weird and some of them snickered and it was hard to ignore it, so hard they dropped out of school and hung around this last island in the Southern Sea, nothing beyond buy water rising to the infinite horizon. And did nothing.

  
They looked out across the garden where the dead were planted with the flowers. Crows flew with the song birds. It was a nice day. The columns and the roses almost hid the Gate Rock. Almost. Vivian looked away. "We can look for Gabe," Fiona said for the one billionth time. She used a sweet voice. "We can try. Like Mom and Dad, if he's dead we should be able to reach him and we can't. He's not dead, and he's a Lombardo, and he was different. He would go for something like this. What else are we going to do? Sit here and call to Jimmy?"


Gabe. The legend - the glamourous ruler of a kingdom of conspiracy theorists. The One Who Disappeared. Who might have been killed or not or had kids who lived in other hidden places under hidden names. Or just one. Or not. Gabe who had been good friends with their mother and father and had vanished like their mother thoroughly and completely and only a few days earlier.

Except he didn't leave his blood on the floor.

"Fiona, Camilla Lombardo's been looking for that man. He's like her god. If she can't find him, we definitely can't. We know it. We've tried." Close to tears, there was Jimmy's body and here they were trying to find their parents by trying to find someone famous and notorious and gone, probably dead like Jimmy, she begged her sister, "Please stop."


Fiona shook her head. "I'm going to Cloud Lake. I'm going to look one more time. I'm catching the ferry tonight."

In worn out desperation, Vivian threw out the idea they'd wrung dry months ago just because it was all they had. “Fiona, try Jay again. Ask him out on a date or something.”

Fiona kept walking. “I wouldn't beg that asshole to pick me up off the road if I got run over by a car. He's been laughing at us. You know him.” 

Vivian gave up. She ought to go with her sister. She hated it up at the old house now though. She stood up, then turned the wrong way toward the water instead of the park and looked directly into the Gate Rock.

The thing sighed, and groaned, and spoke to her and looked at her and knew her and caught her. She was transfixed. Sometimes she thought she could see something in it, a face, a shoulder, a woman's face, a woman's eyes. It took her voice and pulled her, pulling at the water.

"Viv?"


She heard her sister walk through the dead leaves, then Fiona put her arm around her and together they looked at the rock with the hole into nowhere. Nothing moved inside it. Mercifully it had limited power over Fiona and now, as it had been before, it had turned down, it was almost quiet.

"It's okay Viv. Whatever is in there isn't coming out. Go home. Don't come back here. I'm going to find Mom and Dad and we'll get out of here and we'll never have to see this thing again."

8 comments:

  1. Don Lombardo...I wasn't expecting that lol. I'm intrigued to know more about these two and who their parents were...wondering if I should know who they were. I love that cemetery, so somber and beautiful at the same time.

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    1. Thank you! These girls have been in the background for a long time, showing up in strange places all on their own (Fiona showing up at Autumn's house). They were both very fond of Jimmy and both crush on Garrett and Jay. They were the teenage girls Rafe saw throwing flowers in the water at Jimmy's funeral. So no, you won't know who they are. In our process of pulling previously unknown or sort of neglected people into the foreground, they made the list.

      And yes. Don is really Gabe's father, going back 11 years at this point.

      I love that cemetery too. I wanted a quiet lovely place at the far end of the island but still close to the sort of strange and ominous rock with the hole.

      Thank you so much for your support. It means so much.

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  2. Twilight can give off such a strange light, but here the lighting and shadows are wonderful. It looks like such a rustic and peaceful spot for a cemetery. I always make my cemetery's too neat and overly manicured, lol!

    Everyone loves an adventure and I hope Fiona is careful in her travels and how she goes about who she is searching for. Their back story sounds very intriguing!

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    1. Hi there thank you for reading this and leaving a comment! Lighting a strange moment in a cemetery on a rough and neglected island down at the edge of the island 'world' was a hard choice. Nobody would take the responsibility for taking care of it. Night lighting is really difficult to use. Day didn't feel sufficiently strange. Twilight has some challenges but not as hard as the other two.

      I doubt Fiona will be careful LOL. Her target is elusive to say the least and other people may get in her way.

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  3. Anonymous6/26/2019

    Loved this little snippet! The idea of this young, orphaned woman going on such a long journey in chase of ghosts that may not even be ghosts is intriguing to say the least! Fiona is one very brave gal, I'll give her that. What she means to accomplish with said journey is another matter entirely, though. I really do hope she's careful. The dead don't make for good company.

    And speaking of the dead... I gotta echo what everyone else before me said: that cemetery is effin' GORGEOUS! It's just the right balance of eerie, overgrown, tranquil and tropical. I don't know how you managed to marry such wildly different aesthetics, but you did and it turned out magnificent. And that sinister hollow rock out there on the sea? The icing on the cake. I love that this is the place where Jimmy is buried, it seems really fitting somehow.

    - Esotheria

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    1. I am just stunned. You know you are one of my greatest inspirations, you along with atomicspacekitty, mao, and some of the other great storytellers and creators of the beautiful, memorable and strange.

      I have relatives who are buried in crypts down in Mobile and New Orleans and those places are a combination of tranquil and creepy and uniquely beautiful. Nothing like what I tried to create but I was going for the atmosphere.

      I wasn't sure what I was going to do until I took a look at Fiona and her sister, where they lived, who they admired, and what it would mean to live so close to that place of the dead. I really like her. Brave and relentless-she doesn't know where she's going but she believes she'll find something she's looking for even if it terrifies her. The dead and whatever is hunkering down on the other side of that rock are not friends.

      It's been a dry week, hot and empty, so your comment lifts my spirits more than I can describe. Thank you so much.

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  4. How heart breaking for these girls to be forced to handle that much loss - and in so little time too. At least they have each other, but I suppose their childhood is firmly over now.

    Again, your writing style is so striking and minimalistic, it uses so few words to paint a clear picture. I especially like "The golden light of the last of the day shone in that candle": just beautiful. It really brings a nice comforting feeling to the whole scene, at cuts off from the theme of loss with some warmth.

    I really like the mystery here: if the people who have mysteriously disappeared have died, then why can't the sisters use their powers to reach them? Very interesting! And I really like the thought of combining two mystical powers to create something new. I especially like that something like that seems to have come at a terrible price for Luca and Kinley.

    "Make it wave its Lombardo hand and do magic?" This cracked me up! Haha, well worded! It's not only funny, it tells a lot about Fiona's personality and attitude.

    Another elegant description I love: "the garden where the dead were planted with the flowers."

    Interesting that they will try to find Gabe. I think back to that last part of Jay's character description, where it is revealed that he fears that Gabe isn't dead and will return. Even if the girls find him, it feels a bit like going looking for a demon: he might have power, but what will the price be for his involvement?

    Oh spooky, I wonder what's hiding in Gate Rock. I really like all the little mysteries that weave into a bigger whole by the involvement of the characters.

    You had some really beautiful pictures in this chapter too. That one at the end, where Vivian stares transfixed at Gate Rock, is just beautiful. The reflections in the water, the flowers on the side, and the gentle sunshine catching in Vivian's hair.

    Great chapter! / Ani

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    1. Thank you so much!

      This one was hard to write. When I finished the long serial story that preceded this one, it was in this cemetery at a funeral and the girls were in the background, never identified but present and throwing flowers into the water. I decided to begin this in the same place when I introduced them. There is an ominous shadow even in the sunlight, and then there’s the Gate Rock.

      Yes, their childhood is done and their whole lifestyle utterly changed. Their father moved them out of their home when their mother presumably died and into a little house on a faraway beach. When he disappeared unexpectedly not only were they left alone, they were alone in a strange place. Did their father know what was there when he left them? Is there anything bad really there?

      They don’t know now what they’re supposed to do with the clue their father left. Your description of following a demon is perfect! I never thought of it that way but yes, that’s exactly what it’s like. If they find him, what if he doesn’t want to help them? Nothing about Gabe’s history, legendary or not, should lead them to think he would.

      I went through different cemetery designs before settling on this one. I knew what I wanted but it took me a while to find the right place with the right road and ways to use plants and stone, something I’m sure you do as well. Designs suddenly look right when you make the smallest changes. The columns and the flowers worked together with that late afternoon light to do what I wanted them to do. Lucky sometimes!

      Fiona has a long road ahead of her. Like Jay, she brings power to the trip, and attitude, and a complicated history.

      Thank you again, I really cannot thank you enough.

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